this… this tastes like egoraptor-
this… this tastes like egoraptor-
EGORAPTOR DELIVERS THE PIZZA ON TIME
I can see a lot of hard work went into this, you executed the emotion really well— & I felt it.
The only critique I can really give on this animation the craftsmanship of the drawn frames can be improved. Which is something I know you can do for future projects! And what you have here is a great start!
Also thanks for giving me another movie I should watch!!
Thank you very much for the critique! I'll make sure to note those down for my next animation project.
Hahaha I like the way these characters move. Nice lip sync animation too! My main critique about this is that you definitely could improve on the voice work. I would like to know what’s going on completely & having clear dialogue would help.
thanks for the tip
Hello! Looks pretty alright so far, but I would suggest uploading finished movies on Newgrounds more than works in progresses here!
thank you sm!!!! i will make sure to post the full skit i just have had stuff to do but i really love ur work!!!!
I keep forgetting to comment on this since the day I saw this during the SMN marathon, but y’all did so great on this. I’m especially in love with the beginning trailer.
If Tankmen were to be animated another way, this would be it fam.
lol cock joke :D
So cool <3
Crossing fingers I end up in one of these in the next years.
the brain coming out of wheezy was 10/10
Glad you liked that! lol
"GET READY FOR RAYYYYYNEEEEEEE"
"not gae, not y e t"
the fact that I could hear you laughing behind your lines just added to the experience.
what
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i would never!
Haha, as a fellow tanksona enthusiast myself, all I have to say to this is—
My goodness, look at all that hard work and passion behind this upload. Wonderful diverse cast of characters we got here.
@TheJ-Pro, your summer has been spent worthwhile because you got up your seat and made something to entertain many a person. I think even Jeff himself would be astounded (in a good way) that someone took all this time to animate something based off of his series. You and the others that worked on this project are living by his words, “do what you enjoy”.
The duration of this entry is impressive, 14 minutes? Jeez, I could only imagine the scripting and time that went behind this.
Now all my praise out of the way—onto the constructive feedback:
- I do fairly notice the majority of the lip-sync is two different mouths when the characters talk [like I believe most of the mouth sync animation is open-close/open-close]. I think in your next entry, you would heavily benefit from adding different mouth openings and shapes when someone speaks, or reference your own mouth when it talks (which is what I do).
- For the character animation, I think a little more could also be going on while they talk—like consider some more hand movements or them moving their bodies.
For example, if a character is shocked, they’d have more frantic movements with their arms and legs— or when a character is irritated, you could consider having them crossing their arms.
- I think the voice acting could also be a little louder than the music many times, Add a little volume to those in your next entry so the audience wouldn’t have to wonder what the characters are saying sometimes c:
Lastly…that poster about how Captain saying “I WANT YOU TO STOP MAKING COCK JOKES”?! THE INACCURACY! Haha jk jk.
Overall, very charming video. I love this c:
Thank you for the critiques! I will absolutely be keeping them in mind when I animate part 2. And thank you so much for watching :)
I love how the bouncing banana up there is like your signature LOL
i don't know what you're talking about
definitely not a self-cameo
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